Today you can't avoid the digital world it's everywhere, on your screen, in you pocket and with all your friends around you. I have for myself embraced the digital gadgets and trinkets of today's world like almost all of the youth but at the same time try to remember to stay safe in the world of internet. I have also tinkered with computers for almost all my life since my dad works at Elisa as a land lord. This helps quite a lot however I'm no master at computers but still better than most of my classmates or at least I want to believe that.
As for digital devices that I own, I have a smartphone, a tablet and a PC. These drain most of my time at home so I have learned a lot how to work with them even if they are quite complicated and sometimes might crash without a reason. And also my experience with these is that the guy you think is really good with computers is just really good at googling. (176)
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Esim.
- Today you can't avoid the digital world PILKKU/PISTE it's everywhere, ...
- I have for myself embraced the digital gadgets and trinkets of today's world PILKKU like almost all of the youth PILKKU but ...
- ... lot PILKKU however PILKKU I'm ...
Otherwise very well written!
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